Thursday, January 2, 2014

Invitations to Friends by Josiah Gaskin



Dear, Mai

      I would advise you and all our relatives to join me in Diversitopia. My reason is that we invite all races in our utopia because we enjoy all types of company and Ethnicity. I haven't  even gotten to the good part yet for those how like  to sleep late like  me our Utopias curfew is midnight. Furthermore we have an annual party for the founders ever year on September 17.


     Now would you join me? The party has just begun.  I know how you enjoy a good party of wholesome fun so why not come down to Diversitopia were the good times never end.    
                             
                            Sincerely, Josiah
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8 comments:

  1. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 6, 2014 at 9:55 AM

    It's a nice invitation, but the gammar makes it lose some feeling. The little mistakes here and there jump out at me, and I lose track of where I was. Please fix these grammar mistakes for the future!
    ~Michael

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  2. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 6, 2014 at 9:56 AM

    this sounds like a good place to visit, but the white highlight seems unnessisary. -Jake

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  3. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 6, 2014 at 9:57 AM

    Pretty good actually. Cole

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  4. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 6, 2014 at 10:07 AM

    I like your advertisment but I think that you should have not highlighted the text on one part~sierrah cunningham

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  5. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 6, 2014 at 10:08 AM

    its really good. jalen.H

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  6. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 6, 2014 at 10:15 AM

    Seems cool. Whats with the highlighted. Stephen McGough

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  7. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 7, 2014 at 5:00 PM

    that white highlighting showed up ongracelands blog to. and this sound nice...... by grace terrizzi

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  8. Rac8 Per6 MThJanuary 8, 2014 at 7:45 PM

    Sounds like a nice place to stay. Tori

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